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Bring the Beat by =WillowWhiskers:iconWillowWhiskers:

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Starlight, star bright, come raining down
like shards of broken hearts
we'll crush our wishes with our feet
and tear the world apart
stomp and stumble with the beat
watch your wishes turn to powder
then we'll snort it like cocaine
and sing a little louder.
©2008-2009 =WillowWhiskers
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Submitted: April 23, 2008
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~gremlinous:icongremlinous: Apr 23, 2008, 6:13:58 PM
.... this is quite good, willow.
~RandomGlompGirl:iconRandomGlompGirl: Apr 23, 2008, 7:10:27 PM
*sings it to the tune of 'Twinkle Twinkle little star'* Nice Willow! :aww:

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~Ekkena:iconEkkena: Apr 23, 2008, 8:10:08 PM
Your poetry is always amazing. I love this.

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=FoxMaxwell:iconFoxMaxwell: Apr 23, 2008, 9:15:35 PM
wow, reminds me of Californication by RHCP
VEry well done! I like it!

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=WillowWhiskers:iconWillowWhiskers: Apr 23, 2008, 9:23:41 PM
haha, I had to try that myself. :D Thank you for the interesting comment. ^_^

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I will find you in the crowded room
I will knock you off your feet
I will burn you just like teenage love
I will eat you just like meat
~RandomGlompGirl:iconRandomGlompGirl: Apr 23, 2008, 9:35:01 PM
No problems Willow! :aww:

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I am a member of SUPER YAOI FANGIRL NINJAS, ^_^ Avvie by ~Falln-Avatars
~purple-samurai:iconpurple-samurai: Apr 24, 2008, 1:08:19 AM
ooooooooh. that's cool. i think i'll try to memorize and quote that occationally.

Blue out

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=WillowWhiskers:iconWillowWhiskers: Apr 24, 2008, 7:08:17 AM
omg what an honor. <3 Thank you Blue

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I will find you in the crowded room
I will knock you off your feet
I will burn you just like teenage love
I will eat you just like meat
~KinjiraretaNingyou:iconKinjiraretaNingyou: Apr 24, 2008, 2:35:47 PM
very cool and interesting

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eat the rich.
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